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Quick sketch animation i've been doodling. I love those hitachiin brothers~

Probably wont get coloured; i dont care for cleanup, i just like to animate

Hikaru+Kaoru from Ouran
Animation (c) shazy
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This is amazing, stunning really. I saw this thumbnail in my inbox and i knew it was something good, and i was right. Shazy you never disappoint with your animations. although I've seen this pose countless times from the twins its still fun to see it turn out so well. the animation is well done, id say its as smooth transition for every movement. its not jittery or lagging at all. if you watch it enough times you'll notice a lot of work put into it. i mean, even their hair moves when the heads move, and the little sparkles that appear next to them, its just, damn its so good! bravo shazy. keep up the good work!

I think it'd be brilliant if it was less of a doodle/sketch and cleaned up a bit more and possibly colored? but that's just my opinion, i think it looks great either way.
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Critique by uk-kappa Dec 18, 2011, 8:54:57 AM
For a sketch this is really good. The movement is fluid and the timing is done very well (I love how the arms kind of flick at the end as they speed up). I like the little details, like how they take a slight step as they move.

The gradient you've put over the lineart is really nice and helps to break the simplicity as well, considering it's just a sketch.

There are a few places where you lose/gain volume (expecially in the buttons) but that's fine because it's just a sketch. The one on the right (can't tell which is which xD), a flick of his hair suddenly jumps upwards on his head at one point.

Also, the one on the left. When his head is moving upwards in an arc, I think it moves too much to the left not to affect his shoulders. You should underexaggerate the head movement or move the top half of his body a bit more.

Other than that, it's really great~ Keep making more!
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SydneyitsSydneyYo Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Professional General Artist
Ouran is amazing, and I love this. :heart:
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Kerokero99 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist
omg so cool! X3
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shazy Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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Kerokero99 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist
np <3 <3
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Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The right one is Hikaru.
I know cuz not only is Hikaru ALWAYS on the right side, but in the beginning, he has the most mischievous expression on his face. Kaoru's is more like "idgaf".
I love the animation, it's beautiful!
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shazy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^^ I cant remember which way their hair parting goes so you're prolly right~
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Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Smile 
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GhostlyLullaby Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
*faints becuase of the end hair flick* I love this, right now i'm playing the which one is Hikaru game... im stumped
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shazy Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD its been way too long since i made this, i've forgotten myself!!

thanks so much
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pichuspokeball Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE IT <33333
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